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My Name Is Jack Frost by Zinantis

:iconkassiec:
Your coloring is amazing! You've done a great job with the skin tones and the blush making it look very alive. The texture on the hoodie is a nice touch. And the hair is just perfect.
My only advice is on the anatomy:
Next time, try making the ear slightly larger and bringing it lower down - towards the jaw.

A lot of artists either forget to define the Adams Apple or make it too big so I commend you for keeping it proportionate in this position. However, the neck itself shouldn't be so close to the edge of the chin. I know it could be pretty hard to judge when your painting is in profile but it really helps to look at reference photos that are in profile.

It's a lovely drawing,
Keep practicing!

~KassieC
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Zinantis Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! :D
I'll keep trying to work on my anatomy, its probably my weakest point. I'm glad you were specific, too. Thanks again for the critique!
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